vox nihili

Your sentences are a little..wordy. Too many words packed into run-on sentences. I'd get my tongue tied up trying to read that. I almost got my brain tied up in ...

It's a very dreamy, wistful poem. I'm not exactly sure what happened in it, but you definitely have strong imagery in it. See if you can make the event a ...

I looked up 'young writers' on google. And then i found this, and clicked on the terrible writing prompts thingy. realized you had to register to here i am. VERY ...

Thanks! It wasn't hard to write, b/c i was wired on adrenaline every second. Exciting story=excited writer. They said it was a terrible prompt, but i loved it. Not too ...

My answer would be that you should do what you want to. I'm not good at sports at all. *sigh* but i still swim competitively. I am good at writing ...

"It happened so sudden. Forcing me to move from Sunny-ville, California to Cold Bay, Alaska." You should say 'suddenly' and combine the two sentences with a comma.

I was looking at the fanfiction, and when I saw a harry potter one, i got excited. Your story sure didn't disappoint me. It's amazingly real-i could see Jk rowling ...

This is from the Terrible Writing Prompts Contest: 6. A man has a terrifying dream in which he is being sawed in half. He wakes to find himself in the ...

When i used the word course, i meant the first course of her meal. Thanks for the comment!

This was a poem I wrote for the Terrible Writing Prompts contest, 6. write a scene in which one character reduces another to uncontrollable sobs without touching them or speaking. ...

i love how you use the questions at the beginning to arouse a sense of wonder. The poem is very gripping, Congrats on using synonyms like 'tempest' and 'storm.' some ...

Overall...what happened? Is this a lymeric, where things are exagerated, or is it just an rhyming poem that isn't supposed to make sense? The rhymes are tedious to read- and ...

"I only see you rarely," Rarely is an adverb-it's garmatically incorrect to say 'I only see you rarely." Try "I rarely see you," Or "I only see you once in ...

Good work, keeping up with all your details-not to mention the initial suspense! Try not to use the word "very"so very, very often! (see what I mean?) Also, try using ...

This is from the Terrible Writing Prompts Contest: 6. A man has a terrifying dream in which he is being sawed in half. He wakes to find himself in the ...